University: Mass Communications and Documentation Coursework

"Average level of analysis"

"More reading needed on media law-inaccurate infromation-there is redress, carried out in court for any member of public-from the Press Complaints Commission. Additionally, if you complain-the accused party has to prove their innocence-the complainent does not have to prove the infraction took place( although the PCC will decide if there is a case to decide)."

"A very good essay, even though it focuses more on the bad points of the Internet than the. It would be even better if it was more balanced! :)"

"Very poor "

"This essay is written in great detail, and each of the paragraphs contains a lot of relevant information to the original statement. You've used a huge range of examples from both films, to express your many points. Your writing is very adavanced, and you clearly know exactly what you are talking about when you explain the shot details. Your conclusion is very good, as you have explained your overall choice. Overall, this is an excellent piece of coursework, and you have managed to make some very interesting points which you could develop even further if you had more time. TSR User: boosh_slayer"