My work experience took place at Forbidden Planet, in the town centre

"An honest account of your work experience placement. You described what you did at the store in great detail. Also, at the end of the report you make some very interesting points regarding the store, and the current employees there. It is good to hear that you want to work somewhere where you can advance, rather than just in a store. Some parts of your report are very negative, and you accuse the store of not treating you like a worker because they would not let you handle the money for example. You need to be aware that this placement isn't just about you. There are numerous rules that an employer needs to follow if he allows work experience placements, so you need to be respectful, as he could have easily rejected you. You tend to repeat yourself sometimes, and even contradict what you have just said. There are some spelling mistakes too. TSR User: boosh_slayer"