GCSE: Geography: Human Geography Coursework

"This piece of work is neatly laid out, and splits up the characteristics into four different sections - which will make an excellent revision tool. You have made many good points, and have used reasons to explain them. An example of a CBD that you could refer to might have been a good idea - for example, Guildford (in Surrey) is an excellent example of a CBD. You refer to 'quiter roads' a couple of times, but what exactly do you mean by this. The twilight zone? There are quite a few spelling and grammatical errors - so I advise that you proof-read your work. TSR User: boosh_slayer"

"Good read and an interesting topic. I thought the evaluation could have done with more analysis as to why this has happened, and in addition, why the investigation is flawed, as the quality of the housing is from personal opinion. TSR User:Phobia27"

"A good attempt at your methodology. You've said what data collection methods you conducted, and where. However, this methodology needs a lot more detail, and I think you should have split up your different data collection methods into separate paragraphs. You also need to include the material you used, which help you collect your data; for example, you mention that you conducted a survey - a copy of this survey needs to be included, and you need to analyse each question. Stating how each data collection method will help you achieve your aims is also very important. Proof-read your work, as I have found many grammatical errors! TSR User: boosh_slayer"

"It was ok but lacked explanation"

"I thought this was a decent piece of coursework which covered the essentials needed to get marks. I thought, however, it felt a little rushed in some parts and aiming to write the bare minimum for each aspect. Could have done with more analysis and evaluation. TSR User:Phobia27"