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A young girl weeps in the murkiness of the quiet train station.  

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Sophie Gigg Descriptive Writing A young girl weeps in the murkiness of the quiet train station. She gently lowers her head as the sound of footsteps becomes louder. Discarded newspapers drift along the sleepers on the track, accumulating to the litter lining the rails. She scowls as signs of life disturb her previously isolated hideaway. She opens her eyes, glances around, and shivers, embracing her knees to make herself as small as possible, hiding herself away from everything...everyone. She doesn't want to be noticed as she drops her head into darkness. Above her slumped head flickers a bleary light, it glimmers downwards and illuminates the cold, damp platform upon which the young girl is settled. The continuous twinkle interrupts the stillness of the station. Light intrudes the gloomy scene, which only welcomes the darkness. As she cranes her neck to nervously observe those walking past, her appearance becomes pronounced. Her troubled face could tell...

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