Original Prose - Rabia and Bryan
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Narrative. As the students disembarked from the coach the fine drizzle that was falling from the murky grey evening sky began to get heavier. "Rabia, Rabia over here" shouted a tall, heavy set Asian man. He was in his forties, his black hair greying around the temples, "Quick, we're in for a downpour". Rabia glanced over her shoulder, her chocolate brown eyes locking lovingly onto the bright blue eyes of the mousy haired boy who stood further back up the coach. 'I love you' they both mouthed to each other wordlessly. Rabia sighed inwardly then plastered a false smile onto her face as she greeted her father. Bryan's shoes slapped loudly through the heavy rain that now ran like a river off the pavement. His feet were soaking, his trousers stuck to his legs they were so wet and his backpack was getting heavier as he went along. Bryan...

