GCSE: English Language: Writing to Inform, Explain and Describe Coursework

"There is a very informative introduction, which introduces the film and outlines all the relevant information. You've made some interesting points about the film, and have used a range of vocabulary which makes your writing more interesting to read. You've expressed your opinion throughout the piece of writing, but you could extend it further by using evidence to back up your ideas. Also, some of your comments talk about the film in general, and you could try and be slightly more specific. TSR User: boosh_slayer"

"A beautiful piece of writing, which really expresses your feelings. You write very well, and have a real talent. The way you say that you couldn't even cry, is very touching and emotional. This is a very sophisticated piece of writing which uses numerous writing techniques. Excellent. This was amazing to read. TSR User: boosh_slayer"

"An interesting piece of writing, which makes some points which I agree with. The language you use is a little advanced, and it is clear that you are writing about something which you are passionate about. You have made some points as to why cats are good pets, but you have not compared them much to dogs, and spoken about why cats are better than dogs. However your writing is fairly informal and some of your sentances do not make sense - I suggest you proof-read after writing any piece of work. Not a bad piece of work, but it needs a bit of improvement. TSR User: boosh_slayer"

"Wow. This is a really amazing piece. So many techniques have been used, such as the complex and compound sentences which really helps to create tension in this piece, and the imagery used is great. This person has a real knack for writing, and the vocabulary is way above GCSE standard. TSR user: SpiritedAway"

"It was well written, though in some places lacking in detail. The coursework asks for a very detailed description in the piece and less of the plot. The description of the man at the beginning was extremely well done. If description of that sort continued through out, it would be unquestionably an A* piece of work in my opinion. More description of the house and car, as well as setting overall, would have been benifical"