GCSE: Biology: Living Things in their Environment Coursework

"You have a clear introduction, which includes relevant information about the red squirrel. You have given reasons for the decline in the squirrels, and have state what needs to be done if this is to change. A stronger conclusion might have been better for this piece of writing. You could have included some statistics - for example, in your second paragraph, you state that there has been a decrease in the number of red squirrels present in the UK. TSR User: boosh_slayer"

"absolutly fantastic"

"Graph is missing."

"good use of what could be a dull subject"

"this is an excellently composed article about antibiotic resistance and how the misuse of antibiotics has eventually resulted in development of resistant strains of bacteria, which eventually render particular antibiotics useless. Further more it also touches on what exactly antibiotics are, the different ways in which they prevnt bacterial growth as well as the phychological influences driving the improper use of antibitics. It is very useful for those in the field of microbiology."