GCSE: Biology: Life Processes & Cells Coursework

"This is a good plan for the experiment, and you have included all the necessary sections, and have explained them well. It is all laid out neatly, and is easy to follow. From looking at your prediction and aim, it is clear that you understand what you are trying to do, which is good. Your writing is very clear and sophisticated. In future, I always believe that listing apparatus in bullet points, as well as numbering the steps in the method is always helpful for the reader, as it makes it much more easier to understand a follow. Overall, this is a good write up. TSR User: boosh_slayer"

"This is a very detailed piece of writing, and explains the basics on drugs. Including the table of legal and illegal drugs is very useful, and it can easily be read. Many sections have been covered in great detail, such as what drugs are and why people use them. It will obviously be very useful as a revision tool - however if it is to be used for revision, I would suggest changing it's layout slightly, so that it's much easier to read. There is so much more you could expand on, but this is a good start. TSR User: boosh_slayer"

"This is an great experiment write up, and each section includes all the relevant information. Your prediction is very detailed, and you have used what you know about osmosis. Also, the prediction graph is very useful and it shows that you understand the experiment. Your equipment list is very good, as you have said why you will use each piece of equipment - which not everyone does when writing up experiments. Your results are displayed very nicely in the tables, and this makes them very easy to read. Also, your final graph is a good way of analysing the data much more closely - and it proves that your original prediction was correct. TSR User: boosh_slayer"

"An excellent experiment write up, which includes all the needed sections. The introduction is very suitable for the chosen aim, and the list of apparatus is very detailed. The prediction is backed up with scientific evidence, and the writer has obviously thought carefully about their answers. The conclusion and evaluation are also very detailed. Overall, this is an excellent experiment write up and would no doubt achieve top marks. Lastly, I'm not sure where the results were that showed the change in mass in the potato chips. TSR User: boosh_slayer"

"A good write up, with some detail. Your annotated diagram is very clear, as is your results table. Your graph is very neat, and has a clear trend, which you have commented on. Some of the sections needed in an experiment write up are missing, such as the aim, prediction and apparatus. Also, unless you have been told otherwise, I would have rounded your results to two decimal places, just to make it slightly more clearer for the reader. Lastly, I'm not sure what happened to the label on your y-axis? TSR User: boosh_slayer"