GCSE Essays, Coursework and Assignments

"Very good and usefull "

"12-13 out of 14 here, i like the way the essay is layed out: point evaluation this makes it really easy to give marks, the quality of writing is good and the paragraphing makes the points clear. in terms of the content, there are no figures, maybe in the intro put some in, but again i would state the intro and conclusion sum the essay well. you miss a huge point on the welfare state issue of people who are unable to physically work, should we have more rigerous testing on who are incapable of working? you say the incentive for people working is removed, is that in comparison to a 100k job or minimum wage, this is unclear and whilst you may feel thats harsh an examiner may be harsh and ignore that point, as you talk about luxury goods (again where is the definition) overall a good clear essay scoring nearly full marks a couple of key points and definitions left out well done "

"Nice essay. Very helpful. Keep going !"

"#1# This essay excels at its own level in terms of language, as well as content. The question is addressed fully, with a great amount of descriptive detail, which is very important to this kind of question. The writer seems to always find a new thing to say without forcing anything, meaning that there is plenty of room for her/him to show off her/his German skills. The writer also makes sure to use various tenses in German by describing the past in the first two paragraphs, then switching to the present and eventually to the future tense; this further impresses by her/his sheer ability to use language to express all that she/he would like to. #2# It is clear that the ideas and memories conveyed in the text are well-described and the entire trip account has a solid framework and contents. The writer has treated the question very carefully and exhausted it by alternating between different types of description – events, sensations, desires. This is useful practice in German, as it provides both practical and abstract linguistic description. Moreover, the writer is clearly engaged in answering and is not afraid, even at the risk of making grammar mistakes, of expressing his/her ideas. #3# Excellent level of language proficiency for this level. The author is keen to use a wide range of vocabulary in terms of adjectives and describing various activities; unusual words like “strahlend” or “koestlich” are great additions, which ensure that the essay follows a more natural flow and stilted repetition is avoided. To further ease the flow of the language, the writer has made a correct and welcome use of connecting words, which give the account a more logical sense to it, e.g. “später”, “obwohl”, “hoffentlich”. Moreover, the word order remains mostly correct, which is a very good sign of proficiency at this level. There are some basic, recurring grammatical issues, especially in terms of noun and adjective endings when cases are used; these should be revised. Thus, “um neuen Kultur zu...” should become “um neue Kulturen zu...”, or “nach einen italienisch Restaurant gegangen” should become “in ein italienisches Restaurant...”"

"Perfect Essay!!:D^^<3"