AS and A Level: Politics: United Kingdom Coursework

"Has a terrible conclusion, doesn't go into much depth. Not particularly useful."

"Doesn't cover all factors such as Mussolini declining a post in parliament because the Ras put pressure on him to go further. Level 3 standard for A level exam. Some points need developing and linking back to question."

"Helpful but a little hard to understand"

"A top essay. The writer shows an outstanding knowledge of both economic history and the economics concerned. I enjoyed reading this; the confident, concise style is very easy to read, and the writer's familiarity with the material translates into an ease of comprehension on the part of the reader. The writer's own opinions occasionally creep in, seemingly in support of the free market policies advocated by Margaret Thatcher. Comparisons are made with the Labour post-1997 era, with the writer crucially noting that, in a globalised world, the power of government to set restrictive economic policy without damaging their own industries is much reduced, leading to a 'depoliticised' situation. Excellent. TSR user: Edenr."

"Question 2 paticuarly lacks detail and is not worth 10 marks, also Question 1 needs to go into more depth...as throughout."